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Hell's Revolution Chp1 by ~FerasHellsOwner:iconFerasHellsOwner:



Hell's Revolution~

Chapter 1: A Dream?....Or a Nightmare?

Feras at the age of 9 was having a dream when he was sleeping and wakes up screaming waking his brother at the age of 10 Alex up

Feras: .....nnnhhh.......nhh.............AHHH!!!

Alex: .....!!!!....What is it this time!

Feras: I had a horrible nightmare! there were........i really don't remember....

Feras tries to lie because he doesn't want to tell his brother the story...Alex Throws himself backwards landing on his Pillow

Alex: Feras...this has got to be the millionth time you did this to me! look go to sleep we have school in the morning...sheeesh

Feras: ....but...*cut in the middle of his speech by Alex*

Alex: SHUDDDUP!

Feras: .....

They Finally go to sleep and when they wake up in the Morning they find there Mother Elizabeth made there Breakfast

Alex: Mom! Feras is having those weird dreams again!

Elizabeth: oh Dear! Feras Did you Drink allot of Juice last night?

Feras: No..

Elizabeth: do you have a cold?

Feras: No..

Elizabeth: did you watch any Horror movies last night?

Feras: ...No....

Elizabeth: Did you....*stopped by Feras*

Feras: NO Mom I'm fine!

Elizabeth: ...ok dear what ever you say...so what are you going to do today Dears?

Alex: im going to the Park with my Girlfriend , and im going to train on my Staff Skills and go to the Tournament sign ups.

Elizabeth: and what are you going to do Feras?

Feras ...Probably nothing.... go play with Ramsus and Serge or something...

Alex: Yes Feras go to your MALE Friends because your GAY!

Feras: I AIN'T GAY YOU ARE WITH THAT STICK OF YOURS!

Alex: hey Feras Guess what? my stick was given to me from the King himself which was gotten from the Holy Tree , wana know why? because I've been Getting Highscores in my grades and winning the junior league races 3 years in a row AND beat his son the prince in a tournament! and he pimped my staff out as well , it looks cool!

Feras: you call a black stick with 2 silver rings on top and bottom which you call a staff without using magic Cool?

Elizabeth: Now now boys! calm down! now finish your breakfast and go to school.

Feras: Where's Dad?

Elizabeth: you know that he's the HighNecromoncer of the Temple of The Damned.

Alex: oh...wow...how exciting *rolls his eyes*

Elizabeth: Alex! Behave!

Alex: -Snickers-

Elizabeth: Ok boys its time for school!

Alex Grabs his bag and rushes to the door

Alex: Bye Mom!

Feras: Bye mom.

Feras Kisses his mother and grabs his bag and is off to school...At School Feras gets himself Accidentally in trouble

Bully: Hey Dweep you got any Money with you?

Feras: Even if i had some why would i give it to you?

Bully: Because if you don't , me and my friends here will Beat you to pieces.

Two other kids come beside the Bully

Feras: don't make me Hurt you Guys!

Gang Leader: Try us Wimp!

Feras rushes at them trying to land a punch but trips and falls down

Gang leader: not even worth our time.

The kids start to laugh at Feras

????: Hey why don't you guys try and beat somebody your own size?

The 3 Kids: Huh?!.....

Alex rushes at the kids and starts swinging his Staff at the Kids and beat them up

Girls: Aleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeexxxxxx!!!

Alex Poses to the Girls having one of his feet on the Gangs Leader Smirking

Alchemy Teacher: Ok Break it up!

Alex: ....but Teach...its already over.

Alchemy Teacher: uh well...go to your Classes Immediately!

Everyone Frowns and goes to there classes and Feras Catches up to Alex on the way to Alex's Class

Feras: uh....thanks for helping me back there bro...

Alex: that doesn't mean you don't owe me much already Feras.

Feras: Huh?! i didn't even say anything about that!

Alex: go to your Dorm or something I've got class.

Alex Enters his Classroom and Feras goes to his classroom as well.......After School Feras Walks to the Temple where his Father is at

Feras: DAD!...umm Where are you?!

Feras feels something on him and starts to shiver and then Finds a Skeletal Hand Suddenly on him

Feras: AHHHH!........DAD YOUR GOING TO GIVE ME A HEART ATTACK , STOP WITH THESE MEAN JOKES!

Feras Starts Crying while his dad starts laughing and tries to cheer him up

Pyro: Sorry son i forgot that i still had the spell on hehehe...

Feras: -still whining- your still mean...

Pyro: heh...anyways its time for Surprise!

Feras: Dad i had a nightmare...a weird one...

Pyro: Hmm?...whats it about?

Feras: Green Flames....Dark Magic....weird writings....men in dark robes...Blood & Monsters and Demons everywhere.

Pyro: it's maybe from playing all those FF Games Hahahahaha!

Feras: .........

Pyro: oh Cheer up Already...anyways onward to the Surprise.

Feras: Ok.

Pyro: Well First i didn't come to your Birthday this year so I've got a Late Present to you , pick a Magical Element.

Feras with no Hesitations Picks Lightning

Pyro: and Lightning it is!

Pyro takes Feras into the shrine of Mana and starts Casting some weird magic and suddenly Feras Feels Dizzy as a Yellow Light is on him and lightning is around his body lifting him from the Ground and going through him and when the light disappears Feras Begins falling down but Pyro rushes to catch him...a few hours later Feras wakes up in a bed in the temple

Pyro: Wow..your finally awake!

Feras: ...nnh....what happened....

Pyro: oh nothing really i was talking about your heavy Snoring that Finally Ended and hasn't caused my ears to bleed.....yet.....

Feras: Hahaha..very funny Father

Pyro: well...lets go Practicing your skills!

Feras: Are you going to give me a Sword yet?!

Pyro: umm...no...i was talking about your magical ones.

Feras: ..oh that...sure.

Pyro and Feras Finally get to the Forest and Pyro Starts Teaching Feras how to Surge the power through all of his body

Feras: GRRRRRRRRR...whys it so Hard! are you sure you gave me any power at all?

Pyro: Positive...you wouldn't be knocked out all this time if you didn't get it.

Feras: May you Tell me Again Dad....sorry...

Pyro: This is so sad...i think ill turn Emo....*Sigh*....ok look try and focus every single part of your body..

Feras: how so?...

Pyro: *has a cry like feeling inside of him* like when you try and see your muscle but do that on every single part of your body...then clear your brain and then try and feel your spirit...when you feel it it will mean that your connected with your energy and then let it all out like Rage.

Feras: OK!

....After Several Nights of trying Feras Finally got it Right...

Feras: DAD!! I GOT IT! I FINALLY DID!!!

Pyro: Huh!...Wuh!...*Yawn*...who's day is it...

Feras: ....DAD!!!

Pyro: oh sorry... Congratulations...now that you've finally mastered that i will give you this sword.

Feras: *Eyes all Teary Like* Finally!..thank you dad!

Pyro hands a wooden sword to Feras...when Feras sees it he starts crying...after several attempts from Pyro to stop his crying they continue his practice...when Pyro sees Feras Aura he is puzzled by its Dark color instead of yellow...

Pyro: ok Feras i want you to do the energy surge but make them into spheres in your hands.

Feras: ok ill try!

After a couple of hundred tries Feras gets the shape right

Pyro: ok now hit the tree with those Energy orbs!

Feras: Ok!

Feras puts his hands behind his back and starts pumping energy into the orbs he has in has hands and then throws them at the tree....Pyro looking in Awe at the effect it did to the tree...

Pyro: .....

Feras: ......?

Pyro: Feras.......you did something i have never accomplished in my life..........you haven't laid a single scratch on that tree.....Feras Start Practicing 100 Orbs and 1000 Sword swings a day!

Feras: like 50/50?

Pyro: no 100 each hand.

Feras: ..............

Two Years Later............

Feras: HAAAA!

Feras jumps high and blasts orbs at the Tree's Destroying them in pieces.

Pyro: Impressive Feras Now ill teach you a new skill with your sword.

Feras Nods and gives his father his Bronze Sword

Pyro: this is Called Slash

Feras: Father don't you think i know that?

Pyro: not this one , Observe.

Pyro puts the sword in the ground behind him from the right side and  looks at the boulder away from them then moves the sword at high speed towards the target and then the a slashing trail goes all the way to the boulder slashing it in a perfect half no one can tell the difference by looking from either far or near until he touches it and watch it move , Feras's Jaw Drops with his eyes looking in complete Confusion

Feras: ok...that was just weird...

Pyro: Feras this Technique is very Deadly.

Feras: i thought that it was a Skill.

Pyro: AHEM!..as i was saying this move...

Feras: ............

Pyro: ...is a Very Deadly one , as its sometime Hard to see it coming , master it and use it on your enemies.

Feras: if its that deadly why should i do that?

Pyro: your too weak to kill a fly with it yet....anyways we should be heading home as your mom must be bored staying alone watching soap operas.

Feras: ya..your right.

At their House...yes the Huge one

Feras: *resting on his sword* umm so whens Alex coming back from that mission

Elizabeth: next month.

Feras: Dad?..

Pyro: hmm?

Feras: why don't you send me with them on a mission?

Pyro: ...i don't want to hurt your feelings but...you suck dude.

Feras: Excuse me? *Raises an Eyebrow*

Elizabeth: what your father means is that your too young.

Pyro: *whispering to himself* no i didn't.

Feras: but everyone i know is going on missions now , Even Serge!

Pyro: ...Feras look were too tired to have this Conversation may we continue it in the morning?...ok thank you good night.

Feras Goes to his room both Growling in anger and is confused...

Elizabeth: why are you hard on him Pyro?

Pyro: Simple *stands up* He's Weak and Pathetic...and he still needs training...now good night.

Pyro and Elizabeth go to there room and go to sleep while Feras sneaks out and starts practicing his own Quiz which is 5000 Slashes and 1000 Energy Shots , and a little from the tricks up his sleeve....which he isn't wearing...
©2007-2009 ~FerasHellsOwner
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Author's Comments

This was Supposed to be a Game i was making on RPGMakerXP ...but i got no skill...so...me = phail!

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Nice ^_^

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pretty neat so far! it seemed a little on the rushed side to be honest, but now I know a little bit more about Feras's past! ^^ Great!

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thanks lightning my friend ^^

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yes well it was my first story to write so my back was hurting lol....more to come soon!


don't ask how does my back hurt , i sat wrong lol

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ah hah hah... okay. XD You do great so far, so can't wait to see more! :3

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interesting..., it's nice too, good job! ^^

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needs to be turned into more of a story and slowed down.......... but idk what that game maker thing is so ya.

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lol its like tissue paper :D

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